in tedium

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Eternum 1
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in tedium

Post by Eternum 1 » Fri Mar 31, 2006 7:33 pm

in tedium,
i sense his
prattling
through my depths
of reverie
his words unheard
like pebbles
thrown at fish
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Post by moonflower » Fri Mar 31, 2006 7:46 pm

this is great!..and sooo true! :grin: ..i especially love this phrase..

"his words unheard,
like pebbles
thrown at fish"

enjoyed this muchly! :thumbsup: :grin:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: in tedium

Post by Eternum 1 » Mon May 06, 2013 1:45 pm

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