'tight squeeze'

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'tight squeeze'

Post by moonflower » Wed Mar 08, 2006 9:36 am

'tight squeeze'

toes tap to the blues
cramped, throbbing in stiff leather
old feet in new shoes
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Post by Debbie » Wed Mar 08, 2006 6:17 pm

:lol: good one Moonflower.. :thumbsup:
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Post by moonflower » Thu Mar 09, 2006 3:27 pm

thanks Debbie! :grin:
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Post by ninian » Thu Mar 09, 2006 3:41 pm

oh i like it!

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Post by moonflower » Wed Mar 15, 2006 3:11 pm

thank you nin!..so glad you liked this! :grin:
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Post by Shane » Wed Mar 15, 2006 10:51 pm

Nice one, moon :thumbsup:


Although I am of the school of thought that haiku; senryu and quinzaine etc shouldn't have a title. They are their own title, I feel :grin:

But that's just me I suppose :roll:

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Post by moonflower » Sun Apr 02, 2006 4:27 pm

sorry to be so long replying Shane..thank you for reading and posting :lol: ..im so glad you liked it!..and you are right... traditionally haiku and the like usually arent titled..its just a personal choice of mine to title them.. (somehow they seem unfinished to me without a title :roll: )..anyways thanks so much again! :lol:
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Post by rlnimages » Sun May 21, 2006 8:02 pm

very nice poem - and neat turn of a phrase!
moonflower wrote:old feet in new shoes

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Post by moonflower » Thu May 25, 2006 8:05 pm

thank you so much rln! :lol: glad you liked! :lol:
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Post by richie » Mon May 29, 2006 6:47 am

love it you have a gift for these :hello: :hello: :hello:

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Post by moonflower » Sun Jul 08, 2007 12:47 pm

saving this from the pruning shears.. :grin:
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