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Adeo
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by Adeo » Mon Jun 06, 2005 7:04 pm
I'm in prison and don't like it one bit
I'm so miserable and don't have any friends
I hate the guards and everyone here
I never get anything at all
It sucks in here today
I hate it everyday
Oh man it's
That guy
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thief of dreams
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by thief of dreams » Mon Jun 06, 2005 7:06 pm
indeed.. where do you get this stuff from? sheesh... and hey i thought the guy was goin to have a name in this one... werent you asking for a name of someone locked up or wait.. hmm.. now im not sure...
good write though... how old are you again? jeez
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GoddessErika
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by GoddessErika » Mon Jun 06, 2005 9:22 pm
Don't really know where he gets all the darkness from... and yes, he was going to use a name, but since he didn't know your middle name, he couldnt use it! Cough it up though and I'm sure he'll be happy to revise it. He absolutely loves you so I'm sure you won't even need to bribe him!
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bags123
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by bags123 » Tue Jun 07, 2005 8:38 am
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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thief of dreams
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by thief of dreams » Tue Jun 07, 2005 9:29 am
Lee... Terry Lee McGhee Jr. yes the name rhymes, my parents have very little sense of style...
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bags123
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by bags123 » Tue Jun 07, 2005 9:39 am
Terry Lee McGhee Jr
With a name like that I'd think you'd have more appreciation for metered verse as opposed to free verse.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
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bags123
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by bags123 » Tue Jun 07, 2005 9:39 am
I'm gonna write a poem with you as the central Character. "Terry Lee McGhee".
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
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by thief of dreams » Tue Jun 07, 2005 9:49 am
lol. im flattered, really... and i am lucky my pops didnt have the final say cause he wanted to name me Lee...
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bags123
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by bags123 » Tue Jun 07, 2005 9:56 am
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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starfire
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by starfire » Tue Jun 07, 2005 10:10 am
Yeah, well, if my dad had any say in it, he would have named me Chewbacca if I was a boy and Leia if I was a girl. He's insane! No, I'm stuck with Sarah Beth. that blows!
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GoddessErika
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by GoddessErika » Tue Jun 07, 2005 10:30 am
Hey well at least you didn't have to start kindergarten learning to write Anarcha Anastasia Basta! Hello... I'd like to buy an "A" please?
Thank god she dropped the middle name and left me with only 5 of them!
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starfire
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by starfire » Tue Jun 07, 2005 10:42 am
yeah well I have 5 A's in my name to.
Sarah Beth K******
my last name is screwy
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bags123
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by bags123 » Tue Jun 07, 2005 11:03 am
My middle names "Francis" like the talking mule in the old movies. It was a tough two years in middle school.
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by starfire » Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:24 pm
yeah, poor you!
that must suck!
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by thief of dreams » Tue Jun 07, 2005 4:37 pm
Terry Lee McGhee.. can I get an E? or all five of them... thanks Pat, smack Vannah White on the ass and lets get this game started...
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