melodies within miku

Post by **moonflower** » Fri Jul 16, 2004 8:15 am

ive been playing around with Miku..(pronounced mee-ku)..its a very shortened form of Haiku where the goal is to achieve the same 'feeling' as a haiku , only in as few syllables as possible..in 3 lines..(harder than it looks!..

but fun.. and challenging!)..anyways this is what i came up with..
hey try these!..

<center>melodies within

rhythms
beating..
heartsongs</center>

Post by **thief of dreams** » Fri Jul 16, 2004 8:44 am

hmm sounds cool.. but indeed hard... i like yours.. sounds almost down home-ish.. if that makes sense...

ok i was gonn try, but i give up...

Grandma Moses · Post by **Grandma Moses** » Fri Jul 16, 2004 7:31 pm

Moonflower - I love it. Thanks.

Post by **moonflower** » Sat Jul 17, 2004 8:30 am

thank you grandma!..im glad you liked!..

Post by **moonflower** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 5:02 pm

thief im so sorry i missed your post!..i dont know how that happened!.. and hey dont give up!..i bet you can make a beautiful miku!..
try again ok?..

hey thanks for the kind words..

Tom Watson · Post by **Tom Watson** » Sat Jul 24, 2004 11:14 am

Thief?!
Odd
Denial.

Tom

Post by **moonflower** » Sat Jul 31, 2004 7:46 am

Debbie · Post by **Debbie** » Sun Jun 05, 2005 4:46 am

Now this has rhythm ...great work Moonflower...I love everything you write..I'm one of your fans..

Post by **moonflower** » Sun Jun 05, 2005 5:20 pm

aww Debbie you make me blush!..so happy you like this!

Post by **moonflower** » Sun Jul 02, 2006 10:18 am

saving this from the 'pruner's shears..lol..

Post by **moonflower** » Sun Jul 08, 2007 12:51 pm

sorry to bump my own piece, but the pruner was about to get this one!

..

preston · Post by **preston** » Tue Jul 17, 2007 4:48 am

glad you bumped it

Post by **moonflower** » Tue Jul 17, 2007 7:11 pm

hey thanks preston!

Milk White Chocolate · Post by **Milk White Chocolate** » Wed Sep 12, 2007 2:21 pm

I agree with Preston, you did well to bump it! I would have missed it otherwise...There is so much to read on the site.

I like it...it's short and sweet...

It also appears to be quite a difficult challenge the Miku..not easy to put through a message in only three word.

great work Moonflower...

Post by **moonflower** » Thu Sep 13, 2007 6:48 am

i thank you so much for that wonderful reply Milk!!

Miku is one of my very favorite forms of poetry..it is a bit of a challenge, but its so fun to try and say 'something' in only 3 words!..hey thanks again!

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