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Life

Post by soular » Fri Oct 06, 2017 12:55 am

Everything keeps changing.
Nothing stays as it is.

I know it sounds just like an old cliche
but it can't be denied.

It sounds good when things are unwell,
and bad when well.

After going through numerous ups and downs,
one may become aware of life.

And if one track down its root,
one will be taken to the beginning of everything.

Whatever that may be, is always within,
just wanting to live, live and live.

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Post by heinzs » Sat Oct 07, 2017 12:47 am

Live and love....
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Re: Life

Post by soular » Sat Oct 07, 2017 7:20 am

Yes, yes, yes, unlimitedly...
I wonder what else can there possibly be to do in the limited time.

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Post by heinzs » Sun Oct 08, 2017 12:07 am

Try to be happy?
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Post by soular » Sun Oct 08, 2017 2:39 am

"Live and love", as you say, rain or shine. I'm beginning to understand that to be happy is to make others happy when you can. This website saves me lots of times and I can never thank enough. Thanks much, Heinz! :thewave:
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Post by heinzs » Sun Oct 08, 2017 9:11 am

:cool: You are most welcome, Seiichi!
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Re: Life

Post by soular » Sun Oct 08, 2017 9:17 am

:grin:

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