Natural progression

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Natural progression

Post by soular » Tue Oct 03, 2017 9:56 am

Every path you take leads to you
Every door opened, you to be found
You may find yourself in every person

Everything reflects you like a mirror
and tells you who you really are
I’m learning to say yes to all

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Re: Natural progression

Post by heinzs » Thu Oct 05, 2017 9:19 pm

What if you look in the mirror and you don't like what you see?

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Re: Natural progression

Post by soular » Fri Oct 06, 2017 1:07 am

Options are...
- Break the mirror, and just try to be what you like.
- Remember the time you liked, and believe it will come again.
- Think that everything changes and you will like it again.

Everything's gonna be alright, my friend.
A message to me, as well.

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Re: Natural progression

Post by heinzs » Sat Oct 07, 2017 12:46 am

Thanks! :cool:
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