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Mystery

Post by soular » Wed Jun 28, 2017 5:10 am

If loving and being loved were natural like a breath
no one would talk about it and the word would be gone

We've realized a dream of flying and so on but it seems
we always choose to just dream when it comes to love

Seesaw struggle

Everything changes and there's no exception
but what if everything stays the same
and goes at one's own will
Happy or bored?

Make peace

I wonder if there can possibly be
anyone who loves to fight
more than anything

Just everything

Hold on to something that holds you
until it lets you go

Hold on to something that holds you
it will sure let you go

You will see there's nothing to hold on to
but you, who also will be gone

See and see and see till seen through
after all there's nothing

Just everything
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Re: Mystery

Post by heinzs » Tue Jul 04, 2017 1:06 am

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Re: Mystery

Post by soular » Wed Jul 05, 2017 4:40 am

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