All the Facts

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All the Facts

Post by bags123 » Sun Nov 08, 2015 4:24 am

All the Facts

Perhaps when all the facts are known
It could change the peoples minds
Perhaps they'll finally understand
They didn't know half the time

Perhaps when the whole story's told
When every truth's laid bare
They may react like you're a quack
or pretend your facts aren't fair

Perhaps your facts will be attacked
By those who hold them dear or
Perhaps they'll finally understand
That the facts should not be feared

Perhaps when the whole story's told
When every truth's laid bare
They may ask you to take them back
or pretend your facts aren't there
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
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Re: All the Facts

Post by soular » Fri Nov 13, 2015 1:19 am

This reminded me of Dylan.
Oh human, oh us all.
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Re: All the Facts

Post by bags123 » Fri Nov 13, 2015 6:29 am

Oi vey! Thanks Soular :computer:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
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