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Post by bags123 » Wed Jun 03, 2015 8:06 am


A world infused with mass manipulations
Dissertations by the wealthy set the rules
Depending on one's own capitulations
We could choose a righteous path or follow fools

I and I can see these false indoctrinations
Every nation lacks direction from on high
Pretending much less need for their salvation
Hesitation with the notion that they'll die

A world confused by our abominations
Will abide as long as we will let it be
Insidious unholy aggregations
Desecration by ambition's casualties

I and I can feel and sense our trepidation
Explanations never clear in one minds eye
Pretending till some final proclamation
When the words of truth are filtered from the lies
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart

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Re: The Word Of God

Post by soular » Wed Jun 03, 2015 8:32 am

There's one life to live and no time to waste.
I and I have got to find infinity and eternity
within and without. Give thanks. Peace.

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