Red Robins In The Pine Tree

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Red Robins In The Pine Tree

Post by bags123 » Tue Apr 01, 2014 9:22 am

Red Robins In The Pine Tree

Grey geese are flying Northward
from the South
where they once swarmed
Spring rains descending gently
melting winter
in it's warmth

New grass is growing greener
Soon the flowers are in bloom
Though the deer
all seem much leaner
they'll all be
much fatter soon.

Red Robins in the pine tree
Many seasons
has it grown
Accustom to these robins
Making her
into their home.

Grey Geese are flying Northward
from the South
where they once swarmed
and like Robins in the pine tree
They'll both know
when they get home.


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Re: Red Robins In The Pine Tree

Post by Moushka » Thu Apr 03, 2014 3:51 pm

I'm so happy it's springtime. Nice. :hello:
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