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More Than I'll Admit
Posted: Tue Dec 31, 2013 5:35 am
by bags123
More Than I'll Admit
All those years ago, when pleasure spawned our wit
With you alone, and smiling where we'd sit
The white sweater that you wore was double knit
I remember even more than I'll admit
All those years ago, before our love had quit
I remember even more than I'll admit
Not that I would ever wish to recommit
Good memories still survive despite your shit
Re: More Than I'll Admit
Posted: Tue Dec 31, 2013 4:20 pm
by kuperian4ever
Darn good write, bags123
It got me rhyming immediately
Love your poems
Their rhyme, they're meter
I don't see how they could be much sweeter
Ok, that's it.
I'm writing poetry to a guy
O M G
Is that a good critique
or would you like to critique
my critique
Re: More Than I'll Admit
Posted: Wed Jan 01, 2014 12:14 am
by heinzs
Re: More Than I'll Admit
Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 7:33 am
by bags123
Thanks Kupe,.....your response is unique.
Re: More Than I'll Admit
Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 7:03 pm
by kuperian4ever
That's how polite people say, Gee Kupe....you're strange
Thanks for your polite come back, bags123, just sayin
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Re: More Than I'll Admit
Posted: Mon Jan 06, 2014 4:50 am
by bags123
I like strange and unusual Kupe. That's why I continue to come here with all you nuts.
Re: More Than I'll Admit
Posted: Sat Jan 11, 2014 6:15 pm
by kuperian4ever
I'm a cashew
Love those things
Re: More Than I'll Admit
Posted: Mon Jan 13, 2014 10:19 am
by MJPease
Hello Bags, A pretty whimsical piece from you my friend. Take Care
Re: More Than I'll Admit
Posted: Mon Jan 13, 2014 10:25 am
by bags123