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burdick
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Tablet

Post by burdick » Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:31 am

SPRING PASSED ALL TOO
QUICKLY*RAINSCAME A
LL TOO EARLY*NONEEDT
HENTOTARRY*RUSHTO B
E ANDMERRY*

SUMMER SOFTLY OPENED
BEING*LAIGUELIBIRDSON
GSCRADLED PENDING*CA
REFREEJOYOUIS CHILDRE
N PLAYING*WARMLY LOV
EING PARENTS CARING*

NIGHTS GROW LONGERD
ARKER LEAFS FALL GOLD
ENCLETTER*THEWORLDSL
OWLYSOFTER*WE WAKE
ALITTLE LATER*

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Re: Tablet

Post by heinzs » Sat Aug 18, 2012 12:54 pm

A novel format for you, James. Nothing like making your reader work for the reward.

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Re: Tablet

Post by burdick » Sun Aug 19, 2012 3:39 am

ah friend heinzs, I was wondering when someone would work it out.
(a numbr of mistakes in it, but it took too much effort to fix)
my new passion is buying , cleaning, and identifing anceint coins....I did well in ancient greek in college (long ago), and so the form was formed.
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Re: Tablet

Post by heinzs » Sun Aug 19, 2012 10:08 am

Next challenge would be to present it in boustrophedon form...

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Re: Tablet

Post by burdick » Sun Aug 19, 2012 12:28 pm

hmmmmmm.......

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