Sounds of my youth

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burdick
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Sounds of my youth

Post by burdick » Sat Apr 21, 2012 3:24 am

Loud raspy dry call
The sky envies his soft coat
Blue jay flies away

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Re: Sounds of my youth

Post by Moushka » Fri Jul 17, 2015 5:04 am

I'm not qualified to critique but wanted to read by the title. Nice.
1.Believe 2.Belong 3.Become
1.Awareness 2.Acceptance 3.Action

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