Far from the middle way

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Far from the middle way

Post by burdick » Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:35 am

The great step was made.
Dark clouds swept all China.
The four olds were weighed.
The earth turned to fire.

Light died, much was lost.
A new way was found.
(some said, too much cost.)
The light grows more bright.

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