Hey you, stop staring at me
just stop it
stop looking at me
as if you know me
because you don't
Hey you, stop staring at me
just stop it
stop looking at me
as if you know what i am thinking
because you don't
Hey you there staring back at me
just stop it
stop looking at me and judging me
Because you shouldn't
Hey you there staring back at me
just stop it
there is no point to any of this
we should try to get on
Because after all you are my mirror image
Ok that is it. what do you guys think. just had the idea for this yesterday. any thoughts would be grately appreciated :)
Mirror Image
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Re: Mirror Image
I don't know why this hasn't received any replies so far... our critiquers seem to be asleep or off skiing. I'm just here to bump it up to the top for further views... not enough hours in a day, it seems, to do what I wish to do.
Cheers!
Heinz
Cheers!
Heinz
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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