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Post by Laverne Pacquire » Wed Apr 28, 2010 10:42 am

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Re: Dreams - Interpreting Birds

Post by heinzs » Wed Apr 28, 2010 8:43 pm

Welcome to the Poetry Pages, Laverne.


I have to admit that I'm totally lost... lol. I'll be back.

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Re: Dreams - Interpreting Birds

Post by Laverne Pacquire » Mon May 10, 2010 4:14 pm

Heinz, so many people like this one. Its abstract and about crows. For god's sake. Where is your poetic imagination :hearts:
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Re: Dreams - Interpreting Birds

Post by heinzs » Mon May 10, 2010 5:51 pm

Lol... I'll have to stop carrying my imagination around in my back pocket and sitting on it...

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Re: Dreams - Interpreting Birds

Post by mjarabrab » Sat Jun 05, 2010 2:28 pm

Hi- I read this three times, and my thoughts are,,, either this is "free association" type writing (I think I just made that up) not sure if it even exists, or it's a clear account of a very confusing dream which both of which left me lost.
Can you hint at what it means, or is it supposed to mean anything?
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Re: Dreams - Interpreting Birds

Post by Laverne Pacquire » Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:51 pm

God Bless thanks for reading :hello:

mjarabrab wrote:Hi- I read this three times, and my thoughts are,,, either this is "free association" type writing (I think I just made that up) not sure if it even exists, or it's a clear account of a very confusing dream which both of which left me lost.
Can you hint at what it means, or is it supposed to mean anything?
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Re: Dreams - Interpreting Birds

Post by bags123 » Wed Dec 22, 2010 2:26 pm

I've interrpreted birds my whole life. And this poem pretty much sums it up. :?:
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Re: Dreams - Interpreting Birds

Post by Laverne Pacquire » Mon Jan 10, 2011 2:53 pm

thank you for reading. :hello:


bags123 wrote:I've interrpreted birds my whole life. And this poem pretty much sums it up. :?:
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