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snorple
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Post by snorple » Wed Feb 06, 2008 4:19 pm

The Welsh Have Gone their Own Way

Chapter One

‘Of course,
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Re: The Welsh Have Gone Their Own way

Post by Queen » Fri Feb 08, 2008 6:40 pm

so when's the book coming out :grin:
it reads very cohesively and it also kept my attention, are there any specific critiques you are looking for
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Re: The Welsh Have Gone Their Own way

Post by snorple » Sat Feb 09, 2008 3:33 pm

Thanks for commenting Queen, no, It's a first draft and I wonder if it is relevent to today and real.

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