I look up some of my work. And I found that this one needed some editing. I took the liberty to make corrections.
Night Sky
Many swirling galaxies
the cold eyes of the universe
look upon all living things
without emotion...
images in dark surrouding areas
painting unique
forms of unknowns
--without a cluster of stars
there is no milkyway
without God in existence
nothing before him
would have come to exist.
The universe alone,
is this a magnificient work of art?
A Painting with no vanishing point?
3/17/05
Enrique Izazaga
Any suggestions?????
Night Sky (Edited)
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Night Sky (Edited)
" Tell me little starfish
if you have no objection
how do we know which way to go
if you point in all direction"
-Enrique Izazaga
If you stay calm, you are wise, but if you have a hot temper, you only show how stupid you are...
Proverbs 14:29
if you have no objection
how do we know which way to go
if you point in all direction"
-Enrique Izazaga
If you stay calm, you are wise, but if you have a hot temper, you only show how stupid you are...
Proverbs 14:29
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Well 6, grammatically it's perfect. It's not all that exciting though...I would elaborate more on the topic, and spice it up. Not bad though.
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