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Dreamcaster
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Moments of inspiration

Post by Dreamcaster » Fri Nov 18, 2005 1:28 pm

Moments of inspiration


Feeble lights faded into the nothingness
The paint wears out
like a painted picture in sunlight...
Moments of inspiration
pondering in persistant thoughts
your warm smile comforts me
envisioning this blind passion...
This ochone soul
hides in eternal silence
a bleak existence
until the silence
at the sun's awakening.

Enrique
11/18/05

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how do we know which way to go
if you point in all direction"
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If you stay calm, you are wise, but if you have a hot temper, you only show how stupid you are...
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Post by negatvone » Fri Nov 18, 2005 1:52 pm

Read it aloud and you might feel it needs to be broken up a little in the beginning. Try it. See if you can see what I mean before I go on. The artist always deserves a chance to tweak it on their own first in my opinion.

Jim
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Re: Moments of inspiration

Post by heinzs » Sun Nov 20, 2011 10:23 pm

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