Posted: Sun May 08, 2005 6:02 pm
Last I heard Jim was bringing the beans and Gillian was bringing the fruitcake. You and I were chipping in for the Rum.
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(spelling correction in bold)bags123 wrote:The Politics Of Poetry
The politics of poetry is read,
by critical assessment's tempered tongues
Sharp pens have written sonnets now and then,
to post here for approval yet again.
The politics of poetry is said,
by typing some endorsement on the web
Where poets leave a poem composed alone
In hopes of comments where they've left it shown.
A liberal poet reader may pretend
to praise the right wing meter of a friend
Writes accolades before his mouse hits send,
then wonders why such words always offend.
Conservatives who share poetic zeal
Are often know to pen Gospel appeals
From pulpits high above poet's ideals
Their verse is mostly dealing with last meals
And moderates can never find their voice
Perhaps their indecision is their choice.
the meaning here is a bit unclear. No, that's not it, I know you're referring to posting poems on a poetry forum for comments, but the lines feel awkward, despite their good meter. Perhaps some punctuation would help?Where poets leave a poem composed alone
In hopes of comments where they've left it shown.