Mingling Thoughts of Miyu

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Mingling Thoughts of Miyu

Post by thief of dreams » Mon Jun 21, 2004 7:41 pm

She sits quietly,
Watching the world,
Through the widest of eyes,
In a hushed whisper.

A spiritual field mouse at times,
Shaking with fear,
At the awesomeness around her.

Yet she is a mouse,
And something more,
Something that can drape a veil,
Across the entire world,
With barely a thought.

They say age brings wisdom,
But sometimes I disagree,
When the mouse peels back fangs,
For the world to see,
We shake in our fear,
Kneel to the ground,
And tremble in her frontier.
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
Friedrich Nietzsche

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Post by Miyu » Mon Jun 21, 2004 8:08 pm

:shock: :oops: I feel....so...special... :oops: My name is on the title too..wow... :crying: You're such a meanie for being nice...Thanks so much...imma copy this down so I can remember it...YAY*
Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you thank you...I can go on...but I don't wanna get annoying. :mrgreen:

Thank You

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Post by JukotoxKanashimi » Mon Jun 21, 2004 8:17 pm



and the mouse “can” peel back fangs. Awesome tribute thief, I started on one but it was a nasty, crude written poem that did no justice.

Right on.


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Post by thief of dreams » Mon Jun 21, 2004 9:33 pm

your very welcome Miyu...
:cheers:
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
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Post by Tom Watson » Fri Jun 25, 2004 6:40 am

Miyu, a most deserved tribute....from the Thief of Dreams who now has returned one of those dreams and put it to pen, and gave it life and a reality of a caring heart, a cherished part of this "familia's" written art.

Terrific job Terry!! :cheers:

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Post by thief of dreams » Fri Jun 25, 2004 1:00 pm

awww shucks Wats... :oops:
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
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Post by buttterflies » Thu Jul 01, 2004 10:14 pm

hehe you think the picture i drew goes with this poem, Thief? :)
awesome tribute for a wonderful person!!!
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Post by heinzs » Sat Dec 01, 2007 12:59 pm

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Re: Mingling Thoughts of Miyu

Post by BeeJay » Thu Jan 31, 2008 9:13 am

Reminded of Steinbeck's Of Mice & Men....................Nice read___BeeJay
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