ode to the computer

Ginger Jack · Post by **Ginger Jack** » Wed Oct 08, 2003 2:29 pm

cold visions
on a flat surface
reflect my innermost wishes,
my fingers.

information flowing
light glowing
mind blowing
cancer growing

press a key,
smile.
touch a button,
goodbye.

Post by **moonflower** » Thu Oct 09, 2003 7:02 am

i like this a lot!..accurate description of our 'relationship' with our puters..great piece!..

Ginger Jack · Post by **Ginger Jack** » Thu Oct 09, 2003 9:42 am

Thanks for the compliment, it means alot to me.
i just started writing recently.

Floetry Spades · Post by **Floetry Spades** » Mon Oct 20, 2003 7:59 pm

Cool poem,you must love your computer as much as I love mine?

Post by **moonflower** » Thu Sep 23, 2004 8:24 pm

i still love this!..

Ginger Jack · Post by **Ginger Jack** » Sun Sep 26, 2004 4:46 pm

That means that I still like you

Post by **moonflower** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 5:11 pm

thanks ginger..i like you too!

Post by **moonflower** » Sun Jul 02, 2006 9:49 am

still one of my faves!..

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