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Bubble Trouble

Post by nekot » Tue Mar 13, 2007 5:50 pm

<center>Bubble Trouble

I lived in a bubble
for a long time.
Sometimes I'd try
to poke through.

I'd push and push
Stretch that bubble
But then.....BOING

I'd bounce back to the same place again.

Finally one day along came a pin
Pricked a hole in the bubble's skin.
Decompression pulled me out
Sadly, others were crushed within.

Then I'll be befuddled
when I find myself
stuck to another bubble.

Damn this bubble trouble!

Stuck to the outside
A force trying to pull me in,
I almost slip through
but then I remember
I'd been given a pin.

POKE!

Some inside escape like I
Others are crushed within
One thing for sure that I've determined
Ain't no way in hell I'm going back in.

March 12, 2007


Thank you Norm!
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Post by moonflower » Sat Mar 17, 2007 9:23 am

i love this!..its similiar to the fishbowl one..great writing! :thumbsup: :grin:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Post by nekot » Sat Mar 17, 2007 5:00 pm

Double thanx moonflower!! :grin:
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Post by Graeme » Sat Mar 17, 2007 5:49 pm

GREAT fUN!

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Post by nekot » Tue Mar 20, 2007 10:28 pm

Thank you Graeme! :hello:
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