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Berlie
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Post by Berlie » Tue Feb 04, 2003 8:00 pm

here
I sit
and stare at
the computer
the cursor just blinks
and I swear the mouse winked
yet no words come forth
to grace these keys
and so I
still sit
here

2/5/03


* originally posted in the Community Poetry Challenges and Exercises forum
Last edited by Berlie on Fri Aug 27, 2004 11:05 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Post by Moongem » Wed Feb 05, 2003 12:05 pm

<img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="smile.gif" /> My mouse winks too, Kim, what I wonder is, if it is winking when I am not "sitting" here, who is it winking at...? I think it winks at the monitor...should I be worried...?

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Post by debab » Wed Feb 05, 2003 12:13 pm

Hi Kim,that was succintly put, and I know the feeling too! (Ahem...) I don't know about the mouse winking tho, is our fearless administrator suffering from some sleep deprivation from the 18 hour vigil of the site change? We can take it from here for awhile if you need to rest? lolhehe <img border="0" title="" alt="[Big Grin]" src="biggrin.gif" /> go for it <img border="0" alt="[snore]" title="" src="graemlins/snore.gif" />

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Post by Berlie » Wed Feb 05, 2003 12:16 pm

Lol, I wrote that last night while I was trying to sleep so maybe you are correct!

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Post by cglabb » Wed Feb 05, 2003 8:37 pm

Kim, I wish I wrote this piece. I hear ya'.

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Post by Lil Gray » Wed Feb 05, 2003 9:02 pm

Cool form. (I see it's in "challenges" <img border="0" title="" alt="[Big Grin]" src="biggrin.gif" /> ) This one conveys a feeling all too familiar. LOL Good write!

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Post by ehli'schild » Wed Feb 05, 2003 11:16 pm

yeah, ditto that!! i've had many a night like that.

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Post by EnchantingVamp » Thu Feb 06, 2003 12:56 am

agrees with this completely, but i've found that when my little mouse winks like that its code, and you wouldnt believe some of the goofy stuff it's told me, just yesterday it said buy sow bellies, gags. maybe i should. anyone around here have some sound stock advise to share?? <img border="0" alt="[Computer]" title="" src="graemlins/comp10.gif" />

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Post by gordy » Thu Feb 06, 2003 8:39 pm

really clever! i liked this a lot. short but sweet, ya gotta lov'em <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> <img border="0" alt="[ThumbsUp]" title="" src="graemlins/thumbsup.gif" />

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Post by Debbie » Thu Mar 17, 2005 7:39 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol: I know exactly what you mean..lol this is cute.

Bless you Berlie for sharing

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Post by moonflower » Fri Mar 18, 2005 7:29 pm

i can relate! :lol: ..very cute description Berlie!

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Post by Debbie » Tue Dec 20, 2005 11:25 am

yeah this was a good one Berlie..you can't let it disappear.. :bow: :hello:
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Post by Berlie » Thu Oct 25, 2007 3:55 pm

saving from auto prune :hello:
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Post by moonflower » Sun Oct 28, 2007 11:58 am

its a joy to read this one again Kim! :thumbsup: :grin:
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Re: I Sit

Post by Milk White Chocolate » Thu Nov 01, 2007 3:33 pm

You did well to save this little gem from auto prune.
I hadn't spotted it before, there is so much to read on the site...

I can relate so well to it, I have spent many hours in front of the computer screen waiting for inspiration to come. :roll:
She seems to never come at the most appropriate moments ...no, she always pops up when we have no pen or paper or when the computer is not turn on. I guess it's just to keep us on our toes. :grin:

I enjoyed your words... :thumbsup:
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