Moving Day

Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).

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audiofool
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Moving Day

Post by audiofool » Mon Sep 07, 2015 10:17 pm

It isn't too far
By boat or car
We depart next eve
Give this house a heave

You want to stay behind
The stars are misaligned
Without you I'm kaput
A sock without a foot

I read a book of salt
A form without a fault
Words to frame your face
A feeble mind gives chase

Orbiting your sphere
We paused for beer
And retrograde tunes
A pair of aging loons

In the smoking sun
Caress of velvet gun
With flowers on demand
Sweat melting into sand

Packed and heading south
A gift horse in the mouth
With you always beside
Across the subdivide

We'll raise our expectations
On hope and appleseed
Born is a new nation
In soil unspoiled by greed

Caged by candle light
Eyes devour the night
A carriage to convey my love
Rain down from up above

It's not very far
From where we are
Our exit to Eden
Now all odds are even.

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Re: Moving Day

Post by heinzs » Fri Sep 11, 2015 8:36 am

rhyming couplets, varying meter... flows very well. :mrgreen:
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Re: Moving Day

Post by audiofool » Fri Sep 25, 2015 9:20 am

Thank you, heinzs.

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