Empty Sheets

Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).

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Jadynara
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Empty Sheets

Post by Jadynara » Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:35 am

The bed, it calls my body near
Where sheets are full of empty space
Loneliness takes over here
Taking careful time to trace
My body sliding soft beneath
The silken feel of empty sheets

Where lovers arms should lie in wait
I'm left to find the pillow case
Which leads my heart to oft' create
Imagined hands to touch my face
As I feel your phantom heat
The loneliness demands retreat

Teardrops grace my pale skin
Wash away the ghosts of you
The void created deep with in
Offers a very special view
Of a heart that cares too much
Yearning for a lovers touch
So we're lost, at least we've found each other. Take my hand, if we can't find our way out of the dark, we can make our own light. - Nicole M. Goretzke 2011

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Re: Empty Sheets

Post by bags123 » Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:30 am

Marvelously done my dear. I like your style! :hello:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
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Re: Empty Sheets

Post by Jadynara » Wed Oct 12, 2011 7:46 am

Thanks Bagsy... it's nice to be writing a little poetry again. I knew you'd appreciate the meter and rhyme. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. :hello:
So we're lost, at least we've found each other. Take my hand, if we can't find our way out of the dark, we can make our own light. - Nicole M. Goretzke 2011

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Re: Empty Sheets

Post by poeticpiers reborn » Wed Nov 09, 2011 2:56 pm

An empty bed appears to be an extension of outer space.
Another dimension we must face
But sadly not a fantasy
This is reality that lacks all grace
Theres nothing left but memories
of how things used to be.

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Re: Empty Sheets

Post by jhanke » Thu Nov 10, 2011 4:33 pm

Very beautifully written. you give the goose bumps of loniness well. :cheers:
Maybe I should of buried the butterfly instead of picking it apart.

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