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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
- Laverne Pacquire
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- JukotoxKanashimi
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Re: September
the first line was very striking. I normally cannot find a word to say about how a poem makes me feel much less comment about the structure, language, or content of a poem but for what it's worth your poem made me feel...whimsical, a little lost?
but this:
but this:
was good. So good.Our kisses parted and arrived
Depth and suggestion
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