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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).

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Post by Laverne Pacquire » Mon Aug 08, 2011 3:04 pm

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Post by JukotoxKanashimi » Mon Sep 19, 2011 5:07 am

the first line was very striking. I normally cannot find a word to say about how a poem makes me feel much less comment about the structure, language, or content of a poem but for what it's worth your poem made me feel...whimsical, a little lost?

but this:
Our kisses parted and arrived
Depth and suggestion
Outside and inside
-lives.
was good. So good.

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