A diner bar
Stickly holding catsup and
Sugar
The jukebox howls
Songs no one knows
He taps along
Anyways
Clicking, ticking on the counter
Cheese fries melt the griddle
He makes wordless
Laughter
Matching the jelly fish bubbles
In oil for onion rings
Sweet kisses fall
Among cheeks
Complimenting
Twangs of steel guitars
From howling jukeboxes
Muddy hair whisps
Through his fingers
Then around my blushed face
The diner
Hums with what we hope
Love
Simple as tangy and sweet
Catsup and sugar
You
And
Me
Jukeboxes
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Black Star Shine
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moonflower
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Re: Jukeboxes
i like this..good imagery! 
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JadedHopes
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Re: Jukeboxes
i second that comment. i felt like i was in that diner!
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Black Star Shine
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Re: Jukeboxes
Thank you both for the comments (:
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