The Way Two Hearts Meet

[Nikita Mehra]

The Way Two Hearts Meet

The way two hearts meet,
Never to remain the same again.
This heart, so fragile,
Muses over every passing moment,
Every passing moment, reminding me,
Of those times,
When love blossomed,
Its warmth felt so profoundly in my heart,
Your smile that burned a cherubic flame in me,
Nights lived in the bliss of love,
Those moments, so unforgettable,
Where did they lose themselves?

How strange this life is,
For tearing away two hearts, once inseparable,
Words left unspoken,
Your absence,
So impossible to bear,
If this is how it is meant to be,
Why is it meant to be this way?

These moist eyes,
Their story nothing new,
Beckon you,
This heart searches for itself,
Why does it only find you?
My fervid devotion calls you,
This bond I share with you,
Never should it break again,
Promises made,
Never be left incomplete again,
A lover, I may have been,
A devotee I have now become,
Every breath chants a prayer,
Every breath makes my life,
A life that rests in your hands.

The way two hearts meet,
Never to remain the same again.



Nikita Mehra
June 1st, 2009

Hey everybody, I'm new on this forum and I'm looking to improve my poetry with your thoughts and suggestions. Feel free to speak your mind about my poem. Thanks :)

[poeticpiers]

A beautifully written piece of poetic prose. I am certain that most can relate to.
Welcome to the poetry pages home of many many first class writers

[Nikita Mehra]

A beautifully written piece of poetic prose. I am certain that most can relate to.
Welcome to the poetry pages home of many many first class writers

thanks poeticpiers! i really appreciate it! :)

[Spazway]

I had to wipe away a tear or two as I read this exceptionally moving piece. I'm sure most of us have felt this way at least once in our lives. A very beautiful and powerfully emotional work of art.

[Nikita Mehra]

I had to wipe away a tear or two as I read this exceptionally moving piece. I'm sure most of us have felt this way at least once in our lives. A very beautiful and powerfully emotional work of art.

You are so Kind! Thank you so much! I'm honored to have someone react this way to my poem. Your response means a lot. Thanks again. :)

[Friend_forever]

The Way Two Hearts Meet

The way two hearts meet,
Never to remain the same again.
This heart, so fragile,
Muses These moist eyes,
Their story nothing new,
Beckon you,
This heart searches for itself,
Why does it only find you?
My fervid devotion calls you,
This bond I share with you,
Never should it break again,
Promises made,
Never be left incomplete again,
A lover, I may have been,
A devotee I have now become,
Every breath chants a prayer,
Every breath makes my life,
A life that rests in your hands.

The way two hearts meet,
Never to remain the same again

Excellent write... I can sorta kinda relate to the above... I wish you well in your future musings, thoughts and writings...

[Nikita Mehra]

The Way Two Hearts Meet

The way two hearts meet,
Never to remain the same again.
This heart, so fragile,
Muses These moist eyes,
Their story nothing new,
Beckon you,
This heart searches for itself,
Why does it only find you?
My fervid devotion calls you,
This bond I share with you,
Never should it break again,
Promises made,
Never be left incomplete again,
A lover, I may have been,
A devotee I have now become,
Every breath chants a prayer,
Every breath makes my life,
A life that rests in your hands.

The way two hearts meet,
Never to remain the same again

Excellent write... I can sorta kinda relate to the above... I wish you well in your future musings, thoughts and writings...

thanks so much naushin! :)

[negatvone]

I passed over this peice probably 10 times before I could even think of a way to reply. Superb. Absolutely astonishing. Sometimes we all need to see something, and I guess this is my something.

[Friend_forever]

I passed over this peice probably 10 times before I could even think of a way to reply. Superb. Absolutely astonishing. Sometimes we all need to see something, and I guess this is my something.

You put my feelings to words!

How are you doing, Jim? Everything ok in NC with you?

[Nikita Mehra]

I passed over this peice probably 10 times before I could even think of a way to reply. Superb. Absolutely astonishing. Sometimes we all need to see something, and I guess this is my something.

awww. i'm humbled by your compliments ..thanks so much! :)

[heinzs]

[audiofool]

This is special. "A devotee I have now become." Good writing.

[soular]

I enjoyed reading. Thanks for posting.