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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).

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Black Star Shine
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Unloved

Post by Black Star Shine » Fri Nov 14, 2008 7:54 am

How could a boy love someone so imperfect?
with all the wrong blemishes
like zits and sun scars
someone who stands on unstable battel ground
and strives to be noticed but once
who cant fit in the 'small' the world demands
who's cottage cheese legs dont appeal to the miniskirt
with crooked teeth and unfocoused eyes
with hands bigger then mans
and 'big foot' left feet
how could a boy love osmone so insane?
who wears unmatching socks
and talks to herself in the quietest hours
who writes unread tears
and sheds giggles like there's no tomorrow
who gets called the fruitcake freak behind her back
who sings unearthed songs
and smokes others emotions
who is loud, crazy, and obnoxious
how could a boy love someone so unpretty?
how could a boy love someone so different?
how could a boy love me...

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Re: Unloved

Post by Tom Watson » Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:45 am

Ah, but love is found in the heart, not in the shell. Your writings reveal a heart as big as any I have seen here and regardless of any outward appearances (or your thinking about those appearances) your true beauty comes from your heart and when that is revealed, who could resist?
A well written poem. :hugs:

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Re: Unloved

Post by Black Star Shine » Sat Nov 15, 2008 10:53 am

thank you Tom, that really made my day :grin:

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Re: Unloved

Post by Mellen12 » Thu Dec 04, 2008 3:45 pm

Many of us go through life thinking we aren't good enough or pretty enough for someone to love us. But this isn't the case, give yourself more credit. You are a beautiful soul (which is most certainly shown in your poems!!) SO KEEP SHINING!!!! :thumbsup:
"A woman with the courage to step out into the unknown, risking temporary loneliness for a shot at lasting joy, is more than a "single." She's singular. Instead of defining herself by what she lacks - a relationship with a man - she defines herself by what she has: a relationship with God." ~from Dawn Eden's 'The Thrill of the Chaste'

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Re: Unloved

Post by poeticpiers » Fri Dec 05, 2008 3:04 am

Nature in her wisdom decreed we should all be unique but that some one would find us the answer to their dreams. Beautiful people are too bust being beautiful to be real people
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Re: Unloved

Post by wadley gurl » Sun Dec 21, 2008 8:48 pm

thats really powerful.i can so relate to that. :hugs: :thumbsup:
Love looks not with the eyes but with the mind
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A Midsummer night's dream

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