The blue in your eyes reminds me of the sea
dark and threatening
Yet so soft and caring, it calms me
The blue in your eyes betrays your soul
betrays whats in your heart
you beg for something to make you whole
The blue in your eyes matches the tears in mine
it breaks my heart to see what i see in you
it made you strong and yet so weak at the same time
The blue in your eyes makes me smile, for i see the world in them
and every night I thank God for bringing you into my life
and teaching me that finally I can win
to be continued...
"Blue"
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"Blue"
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Re: "Blue"
Beautifully heartfelt...rich with emotion and imagery. It's a great start. I made a few corrections:
Duchess wrote:The blue in your eyes reminds me of the sea
dark and threatening
Yet so soft and caring, it calms me
The blue in your eyes betrays your soul
betrays what's in your heart
you beg for something to make you whole
The blue in your eyes matches the tears in mine
it breaks my heart to see what I see in you
it made you strong and yet so weak at the same time
The blue in your eyes makes me smile, for I see the world in them
and every night I thank God for bringing you into my life
and teaching me that finally I can win
to be continued...
If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you. ~ A. A. Milne
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Re: "Blue"
thanks sarah! me u long time!
"Our minds create our realities based on our perceptions and how we view our world..." "In crazy mans world, everyone else is insane and he is the only sane one"
Both said by My Georgia Muse
I miss my baby...R.I.P Chyna
~*}i{*Duchess*}i{*~
I wish to live in a world where chickens can cross the road without their motives being questioned.
Both said by My Georgia Muse
I miss my baby...R.I.P Chyna
~*}i{*Duchess*}i{*~
I wish to live in a world where chickens can cross the road without their motives being questioned.
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Re: "Blue"
Yes, blue can be a very peaceful, comforting color...
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