Sorrow

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inspired8
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Sorrow

Post by inspired8 » Sat Apr 12, 2008 9:00 pm

So then finale
Comes to past
Where now to go
As nothing may last
Tired the thoughts
Swirl insistent
Blinding eyes caught
Sorrow’s constant

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Re: Sorrow

Post by Debbie » Sun Apr 13, 2008 5:51 pm

Vic I do enjoy these poems of yours or what I call clue poems....

we must take a chance in life even though some things may not last, the day may come when you find something that will last...must keep going.... :bow: :bow: :bow: :hello:
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Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....

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Re: Sorrow

Post by OriOnpheOnix » Sun May 04, 2008 7:56 pm

awakening with eyes of emptiness...
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-Nirvana Inferno-

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Jim

Re: Sorrow

Post by Jim » Wed May 07, 2008 9:24 am

Hi Victor,
Very clever little piece of poetry, enjoyed a lot.

TC
Jim

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