The arrogance of youth, a badge he wore,
is faded at the age of 41;
his sculpted muscles, forged with weights, are sore,
although he claims, “I’ve only just begun."
“Still miles to go, ” he pipes, enthusiastic
about a future stripped of his regrets;
he used to make them daily—some were drastic—
and some still haunt him (in the form of debts):
but, all in all, he’s better than he was,
still fit, still single, rife with unctuous spirit,
a man who’d rather look ahead because
the past still stings him when he wanders near it.
He soldiers on, expelling thoughts of her
with quotes from Frost, and Karen Carpenter.
Strange Bedfellows
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Excellent poetry as always. The last couple lines are killer.
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He soldiers on, expelling thoughts of her
with quotes from Frost, and Karen Carpenter.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart
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Re: Strange Bedfellows
You always get so much depth into 14 lines...
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An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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