Strange Bedfellows

Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).

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David Bradsher
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Strange Bedfellows

Post by David Bradsher » Thu Oct 04, 2007 6:02 pm

The arrogance of youth, a badge he wore,
is faded at the age of 41;
his sculpted muscles, forged with weights, are sore,
although he claims, “I’ve only just begun."

“Still miles to go, ” he pipes, enthusiastic
about a future stripped of his regrets;
he used to make them daily—some were drastic—
and some still haunt him (in the form of debts):

but, all in all, he’s better than he was,
still fit, still single, rife with unctuous spirit,
a man who’d rather look ahead because
the past still stings him when he wanders near it.

He soldiers on, expelling thoughts of her
with quotes from Frost, and Karen Carpenter.

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Post by bags123 » Fri Oct 05, 2007 6:07 am

Excellent poetry as always. The last couple lines are killer. :bow:
He soldiers on, expelling thoughts of her
with quotes from Frost, and Karen Carpenter.
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
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Re: Strange Bedfellows

Post by heinzs » Mon Oct 15, 2007 4:49 pm

You always get so much depth into 14 lines...

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