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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
Autoprune 12 months.
- Floetry Spades
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Diamonds
"You-know-who is sitting less than 2 inches away from me. Need I say more? ..... I am going to melt." -- excerpt from my journal.
I've trapped you in the corner of my eye
and I am melting like chocolate
within your warmth
You are close enough to taste
I can almost breathe you in
and I long to swallow every inch of your soul
and quench my thirst
with the sweat that glistens like
diamonds
off the mahogany of your skin
I've trapped you like a rat
in the corner of my eye
and I am moaning like a slain eagle
you are to lick my wounds
you are to deliver me my rapture
Do you feel the tremors in my heart?
the muscle that throbs like a pulse
Lord, deliver me from temptation
I've trapped you in the corner of my eye
and I am melting like chocolate
within your warmth
You are close enough to taste
I can almost breathe you in
and I long to swallow every inch of your soul
and quench my thirst
with the sweat that glistens like
diamonds
off the mahogany of your skin
I've trapped you like a rat
in the corner of my eye
and I am moaning like a slain eagle
you are to lick my wounds
you are to deliver me my rapture
Do you feel the tremors in my heart?
the muscle that throbs like a pulse
Lord, deliver me from temptation
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- Floetry Spades
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"Floetry, your eyes are so much,
stronger than your voice." -- Jukoto
"Bitter melon is sweet ... In it's own honeyed way .... Like candles don't flicker .... Alone in the rain" -- Miyu
- nacona
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Floetry Spades,
I enjoyed this read for its sensual feel, you write this style very well, and I am impressed with you poem. The last line is grabbing, but you know its funny because I have thought that before in a situation like that, which to me makes this realistic. Very nice job, thanks for sharing!
Cheers!
Shawn Nacona
I enjoyed this read for its sensual feel, you write this style very well, and I am impressed with you poem. The last line is grabbing, but you know its funny because I have thought that before in a situation like that, which to me makes this realistic. Very nice job, thanks for sharing!
Cheers!
Shawn Nacona
"I know how hard it is for you to put food on your family." —Greater Nashua, N.H., Jan. 27, 2000 -George W. Bush
- Floetry Spades
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Thanks ... you know ... this is just what happens when he gets this close to me.
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"Floetry, your eyes are so much,
stronger than your voice." -- Jukoto
"Bitter melon is sweet ... In it's own honeyed way .... Like candles don't flicker .... Alone in the rain" -- Miyu
- buttterflies
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excepting the image of the "rat," i really enjoyed this write, floet... i just have a serious aversion to anything rodent-ish... .... but well done with the poem. you brought the emotions into a very palpable state; one i can relate to so well...
"To be one, to be united is a great thing. But to respect the right to be different is maybe even greater." -Bono (U2)
"You have no choice of subject matter. You write what's in your heart and on your mind unless of course it's crap in which case it means you've thought about it too much." -Bono
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"You have no choice of subject matter. You write what's in your heart and on your mind unless of course it's crap in which case it means you've thought about it too much." -Bono
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- Floetry Spades
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Thanks a million, Buttas.
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"Floetry, your eyes are so much,
stronger than your voice." -- Jukoto
"Bitter melon is sweet ... In it's own honeyed way .... Like candles don't flicker .... Alone in the rain" -- Miyu
I agree with buttterflies, rats and I don't get alone to well. This was a sensual write, and I really did love reading it.
But if he made me feel that way I think I would have to set a trap and catch him. I think I would keep him all to myself!!!!
But if he made me feel that way I think I would have to set a trap and catch him. I think I would keep him all to myself!!!!
~On the edge of this abyss I stand looking into eternity mesmerized by words spoken by you of undescribable beauty~ author {ME}
- Floetry Spades
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I just might do that Angeleyes.
Thanks Everybody.
Thanks Everybody.
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"Floetry, your eyes are so much,
stronger than your voice." -- Jukoto
"Bitter melon is sweet ... In it's own honeyed way .... Like candles don't flicker .... Alone in the rain" -- Miyu
- heinzs
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Re: Diamonds
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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