**Present Perfect** Poem of the Week 7/23/06

Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).

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**Present Perfect** Poem of the Week 7/23/06

Post by Friend_forever » Mon Jul 10, 2006 7:52 am

Winner: Poem of the Week: July 23, 2006
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Present Perfect
by friend_forever

Silken promises
softly whispered.
Feathery kisses
lightly lingered.

Hidden desires
tenderly caressed.
Extreme ecstasies
emerge unreserved.

Velvety winds…
Passions unfamiliar
United souls,
blissfully whimper.

Fervent kisses…
unlimited frenzies,
Eternally vow
“Infinitely yours”.

Tingling wishes...
Unbearable emotions,
intertwined bodies…
Present perfect.

:cool:

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Nominated for Poem of the Week on 7/15/06
Re nominated 7/16/06
Last edited by Friend_forever on Wed Aug 16, 2006 7:50 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Debbie » Thu Jul 13, 2006 5:43 am

I'm not a critique Naushin...but I read this anyhow..and did enjoy this poem...LOVE....is all I felt in it....the feel of first love that is... :bow:
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Post by Friend_forever » Thu Jul 13, 2006 7:18 am

Thanks Debbie...

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Post by Friend_forever » Mon Jul 31, 2006 3:23 pm

what a surprise to come back to... thank you all who nominated it, and thank you all those who voted on it.

Nin, have you been to check this?
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara
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Post by foreverflame » Tue Aug 01, 2006 4:21 am

Nice two word theme, Naush.

Good emotional wording.
"Born into
these crooked ways.
I never even asked to come,
so now I'm living in the days.
I struggle and fight
to stay alive,
hoping that one day
I earn my chance to die..." - Goodie Mob
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Post by Friend_forever » Wed Aug 16, 2006 7:45 pm

thanks Carlos...

took me days to get it this far.... and a zillion tries...
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Post by Tom Watson » Sat Aug 26, 2006 12:01 pm

Most deserving, Naushin...
Not many words are not needed to express a moment such as this...

:bow:

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Post by Friend_forever » Mon Nov 13, 2006 12:39 pm

Thank you very much for leaving a comment Tom...
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I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
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Post by nacona » Tue Nov 14, 2006 6:33 am

Friend_forever,

Thank you for sharing this, this truly deserved a forum award, I enjoyed your poem, this was sensuous, passionate, romantic, intense, and beautiful in that it is a great description through imagery of the act of love making. Awsome job!

Cheers! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Post by Friend_forever » Mon Nov 20, 2006 6:15 pm

merci, nacona...

thanks for the beautiful comments...

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Re: **Present Perfect** Poem of the Week 7/23/06

Post by heinzs » Fri Nov 23, 2007 1:20 pm

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Re: **Present Perfect** Poem of the Week 7/23/06

Post by Friend_forever » Wed Feb 25, 2009 9:20 am

I do want to keep this around still... :bump:
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
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Re: **Present Perfect** Poem of the Week 7/23/06

Post by poeticpiers » Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:39 pm

Present perfect perfectly presented
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Re: **Present Perfect** Poem of the Week 7/23/06

Post by Friend_forever » Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:44 pm

poeticpiers wrote:Present perfect perfectly presented

Thanks!

Sorry Didnt realize someone had replied!
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Re: **Present Perfect** Poem of the Week 7/23/06

Post by Friend_forever » Thu Oct 07, 2010 7:44 am

Thanks for bringing this back up, Kloyd... :)
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara
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