Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
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Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).
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Eternum 1
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by Eternum 1 » Fri Jun 02, 2006 9:43 pm
When I am old
and the bending river
nears the pools of heaven
as blossoms fall from the trees
My tired flesh will yet rejoice
at every erotic memory
When I am old
and the clocks have unwound
around father time
who now looks a lot like me
Your kiss will still bring a blush
to my skin and a stir in my jeans
When I am old
and a doctor wipes
one last tear from my cheek
as your face comes into view
The last sweet breath that enters my chest
will be filled with the scent of you
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richie
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by richie » Sat Jun 03, 2006 2:19 am
excellent
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by Friend_forever » Tue Jun 06, 2006 2:36 am
Too beautiful ET... too beautiful...
to have such a love... its admirable... makes me and the love I have... had... look so shallow...
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara
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ninian
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by ninian » Tue Jun 06, 2006 2:51 am
nice sentiment...sweet ending
Eternum 1 wrote:The last sweet breath that enters my chest
will be filled with the scent of you
Anyone can be passionate, but it takes real lovers to be silly.
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by northstar » Tue Jun 06, 2006 7:33 am
..tender poem
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you
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by The Lonely Stranger » Mon Jun 12, 2006 6:14 am
One of the most beautiful poems that I've read in a very very long time. I am just jealous that I didn't write this. It is just a stunningly wonderful write.
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by howardtsu » Tue Jun 13, 2006 7:23 am
great poem
My tired flesh will yet rejoice
at every erotic memory
i hope i'll be able to say this
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Eternum 1
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by Eternum 1 » Fri Jun 16, 2006 1:03 pm
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by AlluraD » Fri Jun 16, 2006 1:10 pm
*soft smile*......may it forever be so.........beautiful and so full with complete and total love and faith~
Very glad I read this today....true poetry of the soul~
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Eternum 1
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by Eternum 1 » Thu May 31, 2007 1:04 pm
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by Graeme » Thu May 31, 2007 3:38 pm
This is sooooo beautifully written.
This above all to thine own self be true.
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by Spazway » Fri Jun 01, 2007 10:58 am
Simply beautiful, Dennis. The emotion in it is so palpable and the images are so vivid.
If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you. ~ A. A. Milne
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Eternum 1
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by Eternum 1 » Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:51 pm
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by Tony Fiona » Tue Jun 03, 2008 10:08 am
well done
an easy fav.
" There's a race of men that can't stay still
A race that don't fit in
They break the hearts of kith and kin
and roam the world at will. " ------------Robert Service
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by JGarrison » Wed Jun 04, 2008 10:12 pm
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