In Your Garden

Love poems and poems of romantic interest (not erotica).

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Eternum 1
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In Your Garden

Post by Eternum 1 » Wed May 24, 2006 11:02 pm

as I watch you
tending your garden,
nature responds
to your touch
in manifold ways

a butterfly,
descends from a tulip
to
drink
the dew
on your shoe

a thread from
a web
breaks loose
then floats
to caress
your cheek

even the
bees dance
saucily
near
your scent

seems
nature
and I
are in
sublime agreement
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richie
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Post by richie » Thu May 25, 2006 12:24 am

lovely poem

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stainedglassillusions

Post by stainedglassillusions » Fri May 26, 2006 6:41 pm

great write it seemed so light and whimsical

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Post by Friend_forever » Tue Jun 06, 2006 2:41 am

great write ET... enjoyed the softness with which you have written this one...

excellent!!
And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
~ Jadynara

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Post by ninian » Tue Jun 06, 2006 2:50 am

sweet....
Anyone can be passionate, but it takes real lovers to be silly.

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Post by northstar » Tue Jun 06, 2006 7:34 am

..nice ballance on that poem
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you

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Post by moonflower » Tue Jun 06, 2006 12:26 pm

oh how sweet and beautiful Eternum!..its wonderful!.. :thumbsup: :lol:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

visit my poets page

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Re: In Your Garden

Post by Eternum 1 » Thu Jun 12, 2008 9:53 pm

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Re: In Your Garden

Post by fstasu53 » Wed Jun 18, 2008 1:11 pm

Simply beautiful, like a fresh spring day.

Bobbi

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Re: In Your Garden

Post by Eternum 1 » Fri Jul 16, 2010 1:39 pm

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Re: In Your Garden

Post by JadedHopes » Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:49 am

Gorgeous!
no limits. just edges. - Jackson Pollack

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Re: In Your Garden

Post by Eternum 1 » Mon Nov 11, 2013 9:42 am

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