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Dema
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Glorified Fathers and Condemned Mothers!

Post by Dema » Thu Sep 17, 2015 6:32 am

They shined like pearls of ocean in love,
Precious jewels in devotion and fathers life carriers!
They gave birth to Light and Dark.
Even when Pandora opened the box after burial,
Like Eve ate the apples and both of them left mark on mankind.
Poets composed the holy poetry not for preachers blinds!

Their God of Life's Death and his lovers of hate,
Spread and broke the gates to executions.
"Thou shall not kill", wills to extermination of heresy with this delusion!
Only will of Buddha would cease all the persecutions and Hypocrisy
Witches cried miserably, "Save us from being saved!"
As Cruel Gods bled blood of One God for Christs sake.

Hunters hunted these flowers in divine universe.
Holy Roses of Love burned to steaks! On each burning stitch a holy verse.
Who's sect's doctrine was correct and who's was mistake or neither?
Misses takers took sacred lives and left the aches with the curse.
They died for us, saving us unsaved on all slaving day.
Dooms were dressed in black walking the world giving her heart attacks!
Last edited by Dema on Wed Dec 16, 2015 10:57 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Glorified Fathers and Condemned Mothers!

Post by Delsol » Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:13 pm

Very creative, Dema! I have read this piece several times, basking in the many images – enjoying the symbolism while simply taking in the vibe, too. Tell me, what inspired this offering? The first strophe is the most touching – for me. <3
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