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Centred experimental form

Post by poeticpiers » Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:00 am

Centered

The silence of the night profound.
Unbroken by the slightest sound.
Envelopes me.

Serenity envelopes me
From earthly worries I am free
Just for a while.

I can enjoy just for a while
a complete change from my life style.
No need to rush.

I am content no need to rush.
Sit quietly amidst the hush.
I still my mind.

Effortlessly I still my mind
and meditate until I find
my inner core.

When I have reached my inner core
I need not struggle any more.
I am at peace.

I realise I am at peace
when all my errant thought trains cease.
I can just be.

I understand I can just be
if only temporarily.
Then I must go.

An hour or two then I must go
back to the noisy world I know.
Reluctantly.

Surrendering reluctantly
the only time that I am free
to be just me.

21-Oct-08


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Re: Centred experimental form

Post by nrip4life » Sat Nov 01, 2008 2:19 am

:bump: the most beautiful thing ive ever heard.....its in that moment that noone will be able to feel by just reading the words, but how well we FEW have that moment i fell what your saying..and let the rest fall away
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Re: Centred experimental form

Post by heinzs » Sat Nov 01, 2008 11:09 am

Ivor, did you wish to actually present this "centered"? If so, I can do that for you.

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Post by poeticpiers » Sat Nov 01, 2008 1:06 pm

yes please Heinz I prefer my poems to be centred a personal idiosyncracy and relevan to this one in particular ivor
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Post by poeticpiers » Sat Nov 01, 2008 1:08 pm

That is indeed a high compliment you pay me I can but say thankyou
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Post by heinzs » Sat Nov 01, 2008 1:47 pm

Done. If you use the "edit" button you will see the code I have used to center the piece, as well as making your blog a live link.

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Post by Jess Schue » Sat Nov 01, 2008 6:32 pm

:bow: :hello: ..so wonderful~always...Slayer*
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Don't be afraid to care.-- Pink Floyd

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