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Homonym Hymn

Post by gordy » Tue Apr 03, 2007 4:53 pm

Homonym Hymn

As i attend the funeral of my best friend a
tear rolls down my cheek and I feel a tear
in my heart, as they release a single
dove into the air, and it dove

Over my head and soared off to
live another day. All of these live
souls around me with jaws clenched shut or mouths
Agape, remind me that without God's Agape

Love, we would all be hopeless. My
job however is to continue on like Job
He took whatever God allowed and said
"Fine by me God, I'll worship until i am fine`
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

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Post by nekot » Tue Apr 03, 2007 8:05 pm

You are a clever one with words!

I like the form to my eye. :wink:

And I like the way it reads like a story.

Were you really attending a funeral for your best friend Gordy? :crying:
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Post by gordy » Wed Apr 04, 2007 1:14 am

no.... :wink: ............i just wanted to write a poem using the same word(well almost the same word :wink: ) at the beginning of a line as at the end.....thats just what came out :cool:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Post by Milk White Chocolate » Wed Apr 04, 2007 8:10 am

:thumbsup:
I agree with Nekot..this is very clever and it reads beautifully!
I simply love it...
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Re: Homonym Hymn

Post by Tom Watson » Sat Apr 12, 2008 10:35 am

A great example of your true talent!

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Re: Homonym Hymn

Post by gordy » Wed Jan 27, 2010 1:56 pm

:mrgreen:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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