King Me

[gordy]

King Me


Between an angel's prayful promises
And a demon's vehement denial
Stand I, entrenched in a tempest of tests
and torrents of turbulent trials

'though the inevitable was prophetically acknowledged
'fore any demons were seemingly spawned
The multitudes still stood stunned and astonished
to see the crook rooked by the Princely Pawn

[Debbie]

this is different Gordy...

[Debbie]

Gordy I'm glad you bumped it up ..because when I read it a second time I understood it better..

well done well done

[heinzs]

[Graeme]

Between an angels prayful promises
And a demons vehement denial
Stand I, entrenched in a tempest of tests
and torrents of turbulent trials


I can so relate to this - sometimes I feel like I am pulled beyond my ability to do what is right.

angel's
demon's

I think both of these are possessive.

[gordy]

thanks

[nekot]

Wow.....Gordy this gives me chill bumps, raises the hairs.

Tis poignant, it is.

I think of Hebrews where it states he was tempted in all points. Anything we have ever felt or been faced with, he felt it 10 or 100 fold.....from the deepest depths of depression and feelings of ultimate abandonment to the most severe pain.

I also think of one of Debbie's poems about the Cross Standing Tall; he was beaten beyond recognition; all foretold but still mankind was astonished at the reality. I guess the same will hold true for the future?

Okay, I'll shut up now.

Thank you Gordy.

[Tom Watson]

A writing most worthy of retaining for future readings.


Tom

[gordy]