A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by jeannerené » Wed Jan 30, 2008 11:41 pm

Gordy...

I know that I have read your other Study in Perspectives ... but I don't think I ever read this one ....

Well told ... and expressed with compassion....

I'm glad I got a chance to read it ...........
... and his words purge up and outward,
expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots…
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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by gordy » Tue May 20, 2008 12:41 pm

:mrgreen: i lost the # 2 poem it was called gold and garbage..........i will have to rewrite it some time........ :mrgreen:
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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by sojourner » Wed May 21, 2008 10:04 am

Get to work on that! :mrgreen:

1 and 3 are really impressive in their weight and presence. I'd love to read the bridge!

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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by nekot » Thu May 22, 2008 7:05 am

sojourner wrote:Get to work on that! :mrgreen:

1 and 3 are really impressive in their weight and presence. I'd love to read the bridge!

:cool:


If I become an architect, can I read bridges too? :mrgreen:
Bridges give interesting perspectives. :hello:
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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by gordy » Thu May 22, 2008 5:01 pm

nekot says "If I become an architect, can I read bridges too?"


you can also do it if you become a dentist :mrgreen:
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---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by nekot » Thu May 22, 2008 10:37 pm

gordy wrote:nekot says "If I become an architect, can I read bridges too?"


you can also do it if you become a dentist :mrgreen:
Well Soj is an architect I think.

Is there a dentist in the house?

(Look..now...I'm diverting the poem again...so I'll stop now!!! )

It's a excellent poem Gordy....even without the bridge.

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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by gordy » Sun Aug 03, 2008 6:35 pm

belated thanks :mrgreen:
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---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by poeticpiers » Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:30 pm

this is beautiful my friend even to an unbeliever like me
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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by gordy » Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:45 am

thank you poeticpiers :mrgreen:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by gordy » Fri Sep 17, 2010 4:09 pm

:mrgreen:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by Jadynara » Sat Sep 18, 2010 2:49 am

... I have read this quite a few times now. It strikes a little too close to home to really comment objectively on it. All I can say is this is a very powerful piece of writing. :crying:

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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by gordy » Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:34 am

thank you
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

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Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by gordy » Mon Sep 07, 2015 3:40 pm

:mrgreen:
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by audiofool » Thu Sep 10, 2015 10:34 am

:thumbsup: Red letter A for "Amen!"

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Re: A Study in Perspectives Pt. 3 (Accusing and Forgiving)

Post by gordy » Thu Sep 10, 2015 5:16 pm

thx
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My Jesus hung out with thieves and sluts and liars, which Jesus do you worship?

---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

---Gordy

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