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My Father's Nature

Postby gordy » Sat Nov 29, 2003 4:06 pm

As the days shimmering sunlight
Brushes softly 'cross my brow
The autumn evening enters
As a dusky whisper
Sighing sweetly, softly, saying simply
"Child, lay down now."

This days destined ordained ending
Slowly slips shadows up under my chin
As if the moon was sent
By God (or maybe my mom)
To give me a goodnite kiss
And tightly tuck me in

I have a peaceful drifting dozing feeling
As nature holds me, snugly-safe and sound
Faintly I hear a lone coyote's
Nightly howlallujah
A predators primative praise
Prayerfully rising Heaven bound

Realizing, as nature gloriously surrounds me
That no matter how maternal it may feel,
While it may be motherly
Both in name and nurture,
In truth, it's my Fathers nature
Mother nature does reveal
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Postby heinzs » Sat Nov 29, 2003 5:19 pm

Rae Of Sunshine

Posted: 29 Nov 2003 01:10:pm
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This poem is simply wonderful. It was effortless to be inside this poem, to visually see it and feel it as well. The coyote's call was very clever. Rae

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Postby jeannerené » Sun Nov 30, 2003 3:18 am

Truly enjoyed reading... you set a wonderful mood... the twist/insight of the last verse is a wonderful conclusion.

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expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené

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Postby Bonita escura » Sun Nov 30, 2003 2:38 pm

I like this poem
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Postby Ven » Sun Nov 30, 2003 3:46 pm

:cool: :thumbsup:
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Postby Jaysie » Mon Nov 22, 2004 12:18 pm

loved the clever ending. wonderful poem, gordy!
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Postby Debbie » Wed Jun 01, 2005 12:25 pm

Beautiful and picturesque poem...and I love the way you put that wolf in there howling his praises..
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Postby northstar » Sun Mar 19, 2006 5:55 pm

you left me a nice feeling
fresh and beautiful
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you

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Re: My Father's Nature

Postby gordy » Thu Jan 14, 2010 10:36 pm

:mrgreen:
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Persistence is my sword

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Re: My Father's Nature

Postby Debbie » Sun Jan 24, 2010 3:54 pm

I really enjoyed this poem Gordy gotta love the way you had those wolves praise the Lord..so unique you are dear friend and brother :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Re: My Father's Nature

Postby arnoldclab » Tue Feb 02, 2010 9:26 am

Nice poem i read it and really your poem had a thing that someone can really love it.Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem.
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Re: My Father's Nature

Postby gordy » Sat Jun 19, 2010 11:31 pm

:mrgreen:
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---Todd Agnew


Perfection is my enemy
Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

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Re: My Father's Nature

Postby luzagodom » Wed Jul 14, 2010 4:28 am

Hello, everyone,i am glad to be join this forum.
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Re: My Father's Nature

Postby gordy » Wed Jul 14, 2010 9:33 pm

welcome :mrgreen:
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Procrastination is his cohort
Persistence is my sword

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