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Jade
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The dream

Post by Jade » Thu Oct 11, 2018 9:56 am

The dream

God heals my broken pen
As I close my eyes to dream of Him
He came to me through voice alone
That morning I wanted Him to call me Home
But instead, these words He spoke:
"As long as you have a fighting spirit
the Holy Ghost still lives in you."
The dream was over then I awoke
I just didn't know what to do
I was weary, I was broken
But at least my eyes were open
I needed to write again
I needed to write
For Him
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Or should I change the title to: On the verge of goodbye
sticks and stones are hard on bones
aimed with angry art,
words can sting like all things
but it's silence that breaks the heart
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Re: The dream

Post by heinzs » Sat Oct 13, 2018 9:33 pm

This title is fine. Change it only if your own instincts dictate so

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