A Play of Light

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LJAmara
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A Play of Light

Post by LJAmara » Wed Aug 21, 2013 8:14 pm

Dazzling rays of sunlight
Catch my eye
Reflecting shadows
Wisp of vapor
Blown away

Silky summer moonlight
Ghostly silver
Ripples on water
Playing hide and seek
Wave after wave

Dim glow of the candle
Illuminating nothing
Flickers on the wall
Dancing to music
Only it can hear

The fire so warm
A denouement
A pirouette
To coda, allegretto
Why am I so cold?

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Re: A Play of Light

Post by heinzs » Thu Aug 22, 2013 10:02 am

Beautifully poignant, Lisa. Very moving. :bow:
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Re: A Play of Light

Post by gordy » Fri Aug 23, 2013 3:37 pm

wonderful job :thumbsup:
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Re: A Play of Light

Post by LadySaturn » Sat Aug 24, 2013 1:56 am

I like this, Lisa. :thumbsup:

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Re: A Play of Light

Post by LJAmara » Wed Aug 28, 2013 8:36 pm

:oops: Thank you!

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Re: A Play of Light

Post by Floetry Spades » Thu Oct 03, 2013 12:27 am

Beautifully written. short with mind piercing imagery
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Re: A Play of Light

Post by LadySaturn » Thu Oct 03, 2013 2:19 am

FLOE!!!!!!

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