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MOORE

Post by LadySaturn » Mon Jun 03, 2013 9:51 am

MOORE

A violent temptress hell bent on destruction.
From beginning to end
she left a trail of heartache and pain.
Showing no remorse
and sparing no one that got in her way.
Without warning she came crashing into town.
Turning everyone's world upside down.
Cold hearted and relentless
she went after men, women and, children.
A nameless cyclone of wind
giving no rhyme or reason.
Needing no real explanation
for changing the lives of so many.
Strengthening the hope and spirit of those she left behind
as they repair their broken lives.
All the while keeping an eye to the sky
In case she returns
to finish what she started.

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Post by DarleneG » Sat Jun 08, 2013 6:35 am

I'm, guessing this is about the recent tornadoes that killed many and left many others homeless. May God bless those people, heal them and work good into their lives! :angel: You're right, we don't know what is coming next. But either way, with God, we will survive, either here or in Heaven. :thumbsup:
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Re: MOORE

Post by LadySaturn » Sat Jun 08, 2013 11:38 pm

Thank you Ms. Darlene. I felt the need to write this after seeing the destruction the moore tornado caused. It was sad. And you are right with God we will survive. May it be here or in heaven.

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Post by Queen » Fri Aug 30, 2013 11:24 am

very good!! and sad..... i bet some of the tornado survivors wouldn't even be able to read this
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Re: MOORE

Post by LadySaturn » Mon Sep 02, 2013 2:40 am

No, I don't think they would Queen.. But after any disaster one still has to hold on to hope that things will get better. That's all anyone can really do. :hello:

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