Always Be There

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spanky2007
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Always Be There

Post by spanky2007 » Thu Feb 07, 2013 4:02 pm

Through thick and thin
Good and bad
I will always be there.

Nothing you could do
Will make me leave

We have been through so much
Nothing will ever tear us apart

I know words are just words
But I will continue to show you

I will always be there!


This is the first thing I have written in a long time. I hope you all enjoy it.
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Re: Always Be There

Post by bags123 » Fri Feb 08, 2013 5:19 am

for any relationship to work requires constant work on both peoples part. Good one Spanky!
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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spanky2007
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Re: Always Be There

Post by spanky2007 » Fri Feb 08, 2013 8:41 am

Thanks Bags! I am going through a tough situation right now and wrote this so the person knows no matter what I am not going any where.
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Re: Always Be There

Post by LadySaturn » Fri Feb 08, 2013 9:39 pm

Nice Write, Spanky.. :hello: :thumbsup:
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Re: Always Be There

Post by poeticpiers reborn » Sun Feb 10, 2013 3:14 pm

A necessary reassurance which I have no doubt will be read with relief
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spanky2007
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Re: Always Be There

Post by spanky2007 » Wed Feb 13, 2013 5:49 pm

Thanks everyone! I gave this to the person I wrote it for and he greatly appreciated it.
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Re: Always Be There

Post by CamelToe » Wed Feb 13, 2013 10:17 pm

Very nice write :thumbsup:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before
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spanky2007
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Re: Always Be There

Post by spanky2007 » Thu Oct 03, 2013 2:39 pm

Thanks for the kind words everyone!
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