Death of a bumblebee

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Joehanna
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Death of a bumblebee

Post by Joehanna » Fri Sep 02, 2011 10:40 am

World in a water drop
is always upside down
Life after my bumblebee
has never been the same

I held my bumblebee
gave him the last kiss
and I told him
how he will be missed

My little bumblebee
fell a sleep beside me
And life in my teardrops
will never be the same

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Re: Death of a bumblebee

Post by poeticpiers reborn » Mon Sep 05, 2011 7:32 am

I somehow think the Bumble is much more than he appears to be

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Re: Death of a bumblebee

Post by Joehanna » Mon Sep 05, 2011 7:33 am

True

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Re: Death of a bumblebee

Post by edward » Mon Sep 05, 2011 3:54 pm

A subtle expression of sadness without being too overt, too explanatory. Nice piece.

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Re: Death of a bumblebee

Post by Joehanna » Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:08 am

Thanks

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