Wrong?

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ailill
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Wrong?

Post by ailill » Sat Jun 18, 2011 12:41 pm

Who was wrong?
We both were wrong.
Me, with my lies;
And You,
with that
glare of false pride
A-glazing your eyes.

Now,
These scars,
Hidden within
our hearts.

Can they be forgiven?
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crocbait
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Re: Wrong?

Post by crocbait » Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:03 pm

I don't know why nobody responded to this. I rather like it.
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heinzs
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Re: Wrong?

Post by heinzs » Mon Jul 18, 2011 8:17 pm

we're just slow on the uptake... Thanks Linda.
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